Chapter 1-“It’s all beneath the surface.”
PART I – Hot Springs Island, BC, Canada
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“It’s all beneath the surface.”
Under the Surface
INTRO: F x 4
It’s all beneath the surface
In the places we can’t see
In the darkness and the shadows
Underneath, underneath
Dreams, they are the ripples
On the surface of our sleep (PAUSE)
Fathoms and fouled anchors
That’s the deep, oh that’s the deep
Everything’s under the surface
The places that we’ve never been
Everything’s under the depths and the dark
Everything we’ve ever dreamed
You’ll never know what’s down there
It’s the unknown that we fear
Engulfing, all surrounding
Far and near, oh far and near
Rivers, lakes, the same thing
Weeds tugging at our feet
As eerie, the subconscious
Oh so deep, it’s oh so deep
(thanks to Steve Barnes for his 12-string playing on the recording)
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While living in Japan, I had a weekly ritual of going to an Onsen. It was my favourite part of the week and I really did wash my stress and emotional dirt away. I truly associate my time in Japan with pure happiness and I remember just feeling healthy and vibrant after a bath. Reading your book, I am revisiting those sensations and my heart truly aches just thinking back. Your book has awakened those memories and I wish I could snap my fingers and return. I have been back in Montreal since 2004 and there aren't any baths nearby. Thank you for writing this book. Loving it so far... I actually look forward to the next chapter...
I am so impressed with the story and how the author refers to familiar places. The ability to go on line and listen to the songs is so fabulous. Sometimes I find it hard to sit and read a book right through, this makes it very interesting to have the other options to keep my attention. I appreciate the creative way that Steve put this together.
I am so familiar with Saltspring Island. We spent many weeks there with friends who owned a lodge, and one of our daughters worked there in the summers. Your novel brings it all back. We live in White Rock, and still see the island in the distance. Loved your new concept. My favourite book so far. Alice
I loved your book. It is so descriptive and well written that the reader feels he's actually there. My family and I have been travelling to a beautiful peaceful little town called Nakusp in B.C. and this area has several hotsprings which your story brings home. Sometimes the reader feels a little sad or lost after finishing a well written story so your interactive web site really adds a whole other dimension to the story.
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Interesting concept. I am so riverted by the story as a stand alone novel. Actually on Chapter 8-thought I would take a break and visit the web site!!!! Mary Beth
Comment by on 08-May-2006